Poems for study » Inversnaid » Structure and versification in Inversnaid
Songlike form
The verse form here is not a sonnet, but a simpler quatrain form, with mainly iambic tetrameter (four stressed syllables to a line). This is more songlike and creates a faster pace to the poem. Hopkins himself marked some of the stresses, many of which are more obvious because of the striking alliteration, for example the many ‘b’s’ and ‘f’s’ of the first stanza.
The rhyme scheme is also quite simple. What gives the poem rhythmic strength is the use of clear rhymes in tension with equally obvious enjambement or carried - over lines. So in stanza one, the verse rushes on to ‘flutes’ in line 4, then pauses as the water tips over the final drop into the lake. Although each stanza has two rhymes, they are very similar to each other, thus emphasising line endings, although the enjambement demands we read through them. Once again, Hopkins shows his technical dexterity to create a dramatic counterpointing.
- What effect do you think the ‘b’ and ‘f’ alliteration has?
- Try reading the poem twice:
- once stopping at the end of each line;
- the other, following the punctuation only.
- Which gives the better reading?
This darksome burn, horseback brown,
His rollrock highroad roaring down,
In coop and in comb the fleece of his foam
Flutes and low to the lake falls home.
A windpuff-bonnet of fáawn-fróth
Turns and twindles over the broth
Of a pool so pitchblack, féll-frówning,
It rounds and rounds Despair to drowning.
Degged with dew, dappled with dew
Are the groins of the braes that the brook treads through,
Wiry heathpacks, flitches of fern,
And the beadbonny ash that sits over the burn.
What would the world be, once bereft
Of wet and of wildness? Let them be left,
O let them be left, wildness and wet;
Long live the weeds and the wilderness yet.
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